Reword and fix grammar in PartialFailure docs

[rust-lightning] / lightning / src / ln / outbound_payment.rs

diff --git a/lightning/src/ln/outbound_payment.rs b/lightning/src/ln/outbound_payment.rs
index 346190e2085271ea83047112f72ecba3ce737bbc..490aa90697de9581ab493d2cf71c02fbc88e4300 100644 (file)
--- a/lightning/src/ln/outbound_payment.rs
+++ b/lightning/src/ln/outbound_payment.rs
@@ -360,13 +360,13 @@ pub enum PaymentSendFailure {
        /// [`Event::PaymentSent`]: crate::util::events::Event::PaymentSent
        /// [`Event::PaymentFailed`]: crate::util::events::Event::PaymentFailed
        DuplicatePayment,
-       /// Some paths which were attempted failed to send, though possibly not all. At least some
-       /// paths have irrevocably committed to the HTLC.
+       /// Some paths that were attempted failed to send, though some paths may have succeeded. At least
+       /// some paths have irrevocably committed to the HTLC.
        ///
-       /// The results here are ordered the same as the paths in the route object which was passed to
+       /// The results here are ordered the same as the paths in the route object that was passed to
        /// send_payment.
        ///
-       /// Any entries which contain `Err(APIError::MonitorUpdateInprogress)` will send once a
+       /// Any entries that contain `Err(APIError::MonitorUpdateInprogress)` will send once a
        /// [`MonitorEvent::Completed`] is provided for the next-hop channel with the latest update_id.
        ///
        /// [`MonitorEvent::Completed`]: crate::chain::channelmonitor::MonitorEvent::Completed